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Skyy, For the formatting, see if you have the latest version of flash installed. That usually does the trick, but certain computers might have additional quirks and kinks to work ...

Gee, There are plucks of ideas here that I think are super interesting. I like how you took a concept like water/rivers and ascribed many meanings through it. Water flows, ...

Epic, The first thing that stands out about this poem is the form ;D I am liking the short lines overall, I think it actually does help the piece by ...

Reason, Remember I said I'd give you a review-proper, and this is because you rock. And because this deserves it. Hell, you could run out of space on your camera. ...

Jas, I'm excited every time I see a poem from you :) I do have a question. Why ginger ale? It's funny because as it so happens, me and canada ...

Persy, Form-wise this is lovely. Love the waxing and waning moon stanzas and the newspaper print blocks. The narrative of course is honest and reflective without being self-conscious or pedantic ...

Yoda! Your previous blog entry brought me here for the reason that it 1) offended me, for I believe you are casting aside the few of us in the community ...

Zeph, I am loving the concept for this :3 I shall be very interested in seeing how this story unfolds - and I'm intrigued! I want to know who this ...

K, As I was reading this poem, I felt like I was standing against a wall, trying to bore holes through it. As I got to the end, I might've ...

Epic, I kind of want to address your Author's note before tackling the poem, in that I think you'll find that there will never be a single original idea in ...

Heidi, Thanks for your reviews ^^; I thought I'd get back into the swing of reviewing and return the favor. One thing I did like about this is the experimental ...

Kitty, So better late than never, nyeh? I like the opening to this quite a lot. There's this easy cadence where I get snippets of this character's voice that is ...

Lumibunny, Why this works: The tone is intimate and conversational. I feel the presence of the narrator whispering dreams as I lie in bed and curl up my legs. The ...

Rainn, Thanks for your thoughtful review, here to return the favor :) Overall, I personally think it's an interesting poem in the sense that the tension builds itself, so the ...

K, Thank you for your thoughtful review :) Hehe, you're absolutely right though I love existentialism. I'll be honest though, it's been -years- since I've done a proper read of ...