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Purple, I like you. I like how you play with words, and I like how you scrutinize them. It's as though words were sponges, and you can just pluck one ...

Karzkin, This piece is aptly titled, and I think that is what is interesting about this piece because it begins in a very positive, very moving and active first stanza, ...

Aley, The poem for me doesn't start until your third stanza. Everything else is just fat, and not even of the meaty kind- but of the fluffed up, empty calories ...

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Hey Horribliss, I'll just go and dive into this review, because there is a chicken in my house. Ok, so! I'm not sure of your intention for this piece - ...

Jack, Heh. Heh. Heh. I see whut you did thurr. Clever beast. The poem is well planned out ideally, and I think it can work wonderfully - but the execution ...

Jack, You've got some hard-hitting reviewers for this piece already, and I'm not gonna read anything they said. I sorry. esp if I repeat anything. So! Let us be quixotic. ...

Yo Jack, I'm just gonna dive right into this, so! we teem with disability There is something disconcerting to me about the combination of words "stars", "teem", and "disability" It's ...

Demoness, So as I was on my merry way towards your portfolio, I wondered why it was I wasn't following you. How sad. Now, I love how you begin with ...

Cosmo, Sorry for the delay! I am excited to be reviewing however! Please keep in mind that anything I say is 100%honestlyheartfelttruth and so probably 100% gibberish as well. In ...

fffffffffffff, I dun even. Quite coincidentally, I came across a wall of text on your wall and fluttered my way over. I've seen phrase manipulation done before and I've always ...

Siobhanoshea, Can I suggest for the first stanza: The night that everything cracked back open, She sat outside reflecting On the inside of herself. What I'm doing is I'm trying ...

Oh, this is too cool Twit! I've been meaning to read Serpent's Teeth , and this reminds me of it? Sometimes I wished I had a lazy weekend where I ...

Rosey, I'd like to think Imagery and I are the best of friends. I can see her face vividly in this poem and it makes me happy. You capture her ...

AntonioRivera, You seem to be somewhat newish to YWS, and to that I'd like to tip my hat. I hope you are enjoying the site so far! This piece caught ...