Audy

Hey Philosopha, I just want to say, I'm all for experimenting with poetry. I love seeing people trying different things and writing different styles, because I think it's important to ...

Hey Secrete, I actually loved the short briskness of this piece, I found it refreshing :) But then again, I'm a big fan of concise description/concise storytelling. As a poet ...

Hey Manisha, I love the premise and concept of this piece. The idea of writing a poem about a man walking to the gallows is great - there's a lot ...

Hey Demoness! Why is the whole thing italicized? I can understand if it was an aesthetic/style choice. It just felt a bit distracting, I'm so used to italics indicating flashbacks ...

Hey Twistedmuffins, I think this may be one of my favorite of yours -- I absolutely loved it :) I thought the flowers touch was handled really great, the imagery ...

Hey Brokenskye, The progression in this poem felt a bit bogged down/weighty - I think it can actually be shorten and be read more concisely. Remember you want to be ...

Hey Elizabeth, I didn't quite expect this story to start the way it did :o I guess I thought "White Assassins" and I expected it to start right in the ...

Hey Uldin! Welcome back! I hope to see you on YWS more often :o Anyway, I'm Audy and I'll be reviewing this for today -- I actually love fantasy/historical fiction ...

Hey Elinor! I'm not sure why this is listed as 2/3, I tried to find the other parts and couldn't locate them? P: In any case, I've always loved your ...

Hey Kaif, Wow, just for sheer aesthetic purposes I love the layout of this poem and the alternating boxes, I'd love to discover what your thought processes were for making ...

Hey Niteowl, I kind of liked the beginning half of this poem more than the last half, and I suppose I'll explain. The title displaced immediately allows me to chew ...

Hey Noelle, You write well and it's apparent in these scenes. I think the biggest problem here is the events - leading up to this scene, it seemed like a ...

Hey Noelle, The beginning actually made me smile xD It was kind of a slight twist to the trope of: Hero lives a normal life in our world and then ...

Hey again Birkhoff! I'm just going through the green room -- srsly, how and why have these been in there so long, they're great! What I didn't know when I ...

Hey Birkhoff! You know, I've forgotten how much I actually enjoy reading diary-entry type stories, you don't see much of those nowadays it seems - so I'm glad to actually ...