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Hey Jordin! This is an interesting experimentation piece for sure. I feel as though there is a playfulness way you went about it trying to find as many 'eam' rhyming ...

Hey Pickle, I feel as though your intention with this poem is to provide a strong, emotional core -- there are a lot of feelings in this. Interestingly, there is ...

Hey Hanorah, This is a really cute, touching poem. For me, it's the perfect poem to read to a child. Even despite its potentially dark content (death), there's so much ...

SCAR! *squishes at your poetry* A poem about melancholic feels :3 I get the sense of this lady-speaker in her old ages and there's this really strong emotional ache of ...

Hey K, I don't know much about tarots, but I thought this was about such, and the reviews below seem to confirm it. The poem seems to discuss the progression ...

Hey Ghostie! I thought this was a cute poem with a nice flow and brevity to it. I would be careful here: when my toes -- ice cold and stiff ...

Magpie, I loved how I go into this poem expecting one thing: (sick day as in a day to spend under the covers and out of the office) and then ...

Hey Magpie, I'm not sure if it's because I'm unfamiliar with some of the omens -- like for example, I'm not sure I've ever heard anything about bad luck and ...

Hey kayfornight, This is intended as a thought-provoking and also perhaps somewhat reflective poem. It seems the speaker is reflecting on his/her own fears and then wondering where that kind ...

Hey Secrete, This is a very interesting poem and told from an interesting point of view, and I think in many ways, the poem served its purpose in using narrative ...

Misstoria, I like the imagery here, and the rhyming does have an aching effect which matches the content of this. There's a lot of heart ache, and I like how ...

Hey Aouther! Nice use of imagery and repetition here. In combination with the end rhymes and the diction used: moonlight, rose garden, dance, song-- there is definitely a lyrical element ...

Hey Niteowl, It's always a pleasure to read a poem of yours, that said-- I liked this piece a lot -- it was kind of reminiscent of Dylan Thomas' "Do ...

Hey Umaima! Don't mind me, I'm just gonna take a shot at this and dive right in! First observation: I love the conversational tone in this. It's almost like we're ...

Hey Nicholas! I'm just going to dive right into this - so immediately, the thing that caught my eye (or ear ;) was the internal rhyme scheme. I thought for ...