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Re: Paper Girl
Hey Fortis, In a nutshell, it seems the bulk of the piece focuses on the superficiality of paper by depicting sort of ugly/gross imagery (such as drenched paper/ grafitti/ creases, ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Faux Pas
Hey Skor, This one is not my favorite poem of yours, but I can definitely see it as a philosophical piece meant to inspire a lot of thought. I appreciate ...
Jul 11, 2013 -
Re: The Benefits of a Friendly Movie Night
Hey Magpie!
Jul 11, 2013 -
Re: your skin gets thinner the longer it's there
Pers!
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: Undisclosed
Hey Rainn, This is a simple, little poem. When I think of undisclosed, I think of a speaker who is shut into himself/herself, so someone who is guarded and trying ...
Jul 1, 2013 -
Re: A True Writer
Hey Social, This poem is an easy read, and I think the rhymes sort of help with that in that it sounds pleasing to the ear when read out loud ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Lady's Response
Hey Whisperer! I realize this poem is meant to have a humor (maybe even slightly satirical?) element to it. I just have to say this line in particular: O Knight ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Above the Clouds
Hey Nargles! This is a simple poem, two stanzas long, with strong emotional appeal! I agree with all that Hannah has to say, so I'm going to try not to ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Dead Toreador
Hey Cally, Toreador is a new word for me -- I like it! I'm used to using & seeing 'matador' :o It wasn't until I had to look up what ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Love Part 1: The Peacock
Hey Chubaka! This is a cute poem and it looks like it's part of a series of love poems if I'm to go by what the title says. So I ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Humanity Is Not a Lost Cause
Hey Indie! I'm always excited when I come across one of your poems ^^ One day, perhaps I shall hear you recite them :) Someone once told me that he ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Night, Possibly Being a Metaphor for Something Else
Hey Wind! This is truly a beautiful piece, I think actually, my first like of the night ;) I think the poem itself reads almost like a water-color painting, more ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Deep shallow water
Hey Cosmo! Nice to see you again. So I'm just going to dive straight into this. This reminds me of the exercise that Rydia and myself were doing, where we ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Last Time I Saw My Grandmother
Hey Deanz! I just want to say that I truly loved this piece. I love the imagery that was used -- I think it was strong and really vivid. In ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Cynic
Hey Lyssiekins! Good to see you again ^^ I'm excited to be reviewing this, today. Interesting I think that the entire poem is written in dialogue, I always love to ...
Jun 30, 2013