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Re: Wakeup Call
I love short and amazing poems like these. Very well constructed:D. I hope whatever had you down for so long is in your past, and you have all the strength ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Shaking Youth.
Thanks a lot Ink that really means a lot to me!:D I'm glad you liked the link cause I didn't really know how people would respond, let a lone actually ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Iris. And the story after.
Hey thanks a lot! :D I really loved your review, and I will be making changes soon.
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Shore line.
Hey guys! Sorry I never got back to reply on this. I haven't been on this in awhile. So let me just start by saying thank you so so so ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: The ghost above us.
Thank you very much! And I'm aware of the over use of the word "I've", but this was intentional. If you ever seen the Declaration of Independence, our founding fathers ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: The Truth.
Thanks a lot! I really liked all your thoughts, and how you reformed my sentences to flow better. I wrote this really fast, and I didn't go back to look ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: One word.
Thanks everyone, I know it's not poetry I didn't see the "other poetry" option. My bad.
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Iris. And the story after.
Thanks, I know it was vague, and this was just a very very rough draft. I worked on it for maybe an hour max. I'll do some fixing up, and ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Life In the Eyes Of a Godless Man
:o I like I like. :D this was a great piece.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Since then, I've felt better.
D: ahh I did do that! Yes, I know I trapped myself, but I tried to make it work. Thanks for the advice though. Very much appreciated. :D
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
It reminds me of 'GardenState'
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Apple (Rough)
D: I didn't see the part that said this was a poem. So I take back what I said earlier. This is awesome.
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Fulfilled Passion
Hey, very good. I like this poem :D
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: The Reflection
Oh that book is amazing. Damn I hate you guy's in NY! lol just kiddin'. I'd add you as a friend (If you wanted) but I'm not sure how to ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: The Reflection
lol Still I think that's awesome that y'all are reading that. Yeah it gets (In my opinion) pretty damn good. I love Holden. :D
Apr 20, 2010
