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AtticusGallows

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: At Night

    I always enjoy simple poems. There is nothing wrong with them. They help the writer clear their minds, and for readers like myself there are enjoyable. This one is fine ...

    Jan 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Waiting for never

    Dogs! This is a amazing! : D Really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up.

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Beckon.

    :) Yeah I know, I didn't go back to do anything. It was poetry vomit to get myself back in the cycle of writing again! Thanks Ink:D!

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Down the road.

    Really enjoyed this piece too! Great transition to the military scene. You really set the mood in the first half about how the uncertainty was lingering over them. Keep writing!

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Don't fear.

    Hah! Thank you! :D And when I was fifteen I was oblivious that rhyme scheme even existed. So it was just mumbo jumbo, appreciate the review.

    Aug 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Repetition.

    Thank you! I'll probably mess with it again someday!:D Thanks for the support

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Repetition.

    Yeah it's not. I always write nonsense everyday, and just decided to post it for once. :p

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 1)

    Lol yeah pretty bold first line, and I actually looked over at my copy of Naked Lunch to make sure I spelled Burroughs right :p

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I tried

    No problem :D

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I tried

    Hey, nice poem. I think you didn't realized you spelled tried wrong though.

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Fallen from Grace

    I love poems that are this simplistic, and to the point. Very cool very cool:D

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stranger.

    It's really funny how you pointed out the two things I also thought were stupid. I will get rid of She/he cause I didn't like it, and the Angel part ...

    Jul 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: .

    This is a very interesting piece. I like near the end with the repetition of the, "Hanging Garden" and how everything is sown up at the end. Great job keep ...

    Jul 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tides.

    Hah well I was going to post the stanzas on the page and include a link, but that didn't really work out. :D I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Backseat.

    Whooo! Thank you everyone for the words and thoughts, it means a lot! I will take this piece back to the lab, and try to finish it soon. :D

    Jul 12, 2011


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