AttackOfTheFlash

Hello, Flash here for a quick review. Okay, let's get down to business. First, I'll point out a mistakeI found: The boy’s lips smoothed into a smile that could charm ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I'm Flash, and I'm going to give this a review. Alright, let's get started with some technical mistakes. I really didn't see any grammar issues here. ...

Someone below said this is a prologue.... Honey, this isn't a prologue. A prologue is kind of like a beginning to the story. Not a chapter one, but a "chapter" ...

Hello! Flash here for a quick review. When I saw this I noticed it had a good amount of likes and only one review. I wondered why, then I read ...

Hello! Flash here for a review. This review is going to be quick and short because I only have a couple things to say. So let's get down to it. ...

Hello! Flash here for a quick review. I saw this title and figured I'd see what this story is about. Honestly I recommend giving it a title so other people ...

Happy Review Day! Flash here for a review. I didn't see any grammatical errors here. Good job on that! However, while on the topic of technical errors I did notice ...

Happy Review Day! Flash here for a review. First, I must say... YAY AN ANIMAL STORY! Sorry for the caps. XD I really, really love animal stories yet there are ...

Happy Review Day! Flash here for a review. Oooh, this was very interesting! Although overused now days, I enjoy zombie stories. I really hope you continue to make this story ...

Hello and happy Review Day! Flash here for a review (as I promised before). Okay, it looks like we've got a... writing exercise, perhaps? Let's get down to it. First ...

Happy Review Day! Flash here. Okay, let's get down to business. I always start out with grammar and it seems that you don't have any grammar mistakes. Good job on ...

Hello! Flash here for a review. You've reviewed for me a few times and I don't think I've reviewed for you! So here goes... Okay, let's talk bout the technical ...

Hello! Flash here for a quick review. I saw this hanging out in the green room and realized I never reviewed or commented on this chapter! (I plan on reading ...

Hello! Flash here for a review! Yay! Aether's alive! Once I saw this in the green room I knew I had to continue reading this! Alright, this is going to ...

Hello! Flash here for a review! Before I begin I'd like to say that, YAY an animal story! There is a serious lack of animal stories on here (especially for ...