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Re: Headphones
Bonjour, Speakerskat! C'est Moonwatcher, here with a review just before review day begins! Jumping right into the review, this isn't so much criticism as it is advice. I'm talking about ...
Oct 29, 2016 -
Re: Harley Quinn
Hello there, DeepRoses! This is Moonwatcher here with a review just before review day. ^-^ Okay, so do forgive me if I get anything wrong. I'm not very knowledgeable about ...
Oct 29, 2016 -
Re: Cancer
Hello there, Remembrance! Moonwatcher here with a review post-review day and my first step to becoming a knight of the green room! ^-^ This isn't such a big deal, but ...
Oct 29, 2016 -
Re: Drum Major
Hello there, Gema11! This is Moonwatcher here with a review. Jumping into the review, the format is killing me. This short poem appears to be longer than it is because ...
Oct 29, 2016 -
Re: this house.
Hello there, OnlyWaffle! I already read this poem yesterday, but this is Moonwatcher here for a review. Jumping into the review, one thing I believe this poem may lack is ...
Oct 29, 2016 -
Re: An Ode to Winter
Hiya there, UncleQrow! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! Is it bad that I stopped watching RWBY after Volume 1? First things first, this review will most likely be ...
Oct 29, 2016 -
Re: Just a Drop
Hello there, Ghost223! Moonwatcher here, trying to sharpen up his reviewing skills before Review Day! ^-^ Jumping into the review, the first thing I would like to bring up, is ...
Oct 29, 2016 -
Re: Red Balloon
Hello there, TheUnknownWriter! I'm currently trying to get used to reviewing again before review day. Another thing- congratulations on getting this work featured! ^-^ I'm just going to jump right ...
Oct 29, 2016 -
Re: A Word or Two to my Love
Aye, MissAmelia. Moonwatcher here with a review. Okay, first off, this poem feels somewhat weak. The use of metaphor and imagery is present, but poor, and doesn't really give the ...
Sep 18, 2016 -
Re: Just another 'My thoughts" again
Hey there, XxPheonixKittenxX. you wouldn't believe how long it took me to write your name correctly >> Alright, the first thing I'm going to cover here is the title. Just ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: Alien
Wonderful weather we're having today. that's a lie it is over 100F and I'm miserable This is Moonwatcher and I'm here to knock this out of the Green Room. I ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: Revelation
Wonderful weather we're having today. This is Moonwatcher and I'm here for a review. Nothing wrong with simple poems, but the thing about this poem is that it doesn't say ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Flowers lead to sadness
How are you, GreenTulip? This is Moonwatcher and I'll be your reviewer today. the title of this poem and your username...hehehehehe Contradictory themes are fun to write about. Therefore, I ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Across
Hello there, Pencils77. This is Moonwatcher here with a short review for a short poem. I feel like the rhyme scheme in the poem was kind of...odd and inconsistent. I ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Frost Lark News 8/28/16
Heylo, Sheyren. This is Moonwatcher here to kick this out of the Green Room. I see this is based on Welcome to Nightvale. I really should get back into this, ...
Sep 3, 2016
