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Hello there, ImaginationScribbler! ^-^ This is Moonwatcher here with a review! I see why this hasn't gotten many reviews: the readability. And that's just what I'm here to help you ...

Hello there, DivergentDemigod! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ This is a very short and sweet poem, and I couldn't really find much wrong with it because of ...

Hello there, SophieSaysWriting! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I'm going to start off with a very minor critique. Since this the secrets are of the ocean, that ...

Hello there, DeepRoses! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I rarely review formatted poetry, as I'm not the best at it. However, I shall try my best (this ...

Hello there, Cedesxana. This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ Adding on a little bit to what EverWinter was saying, I don't necessarily agree that this isn't in poetry ...

Hello there, BlueRoses15! This is Moonwatcher here to review part two! ^-^ I don't feel as if this really presents anything /too/ new from part one, which I guess is ...

Hello there, RadiantShadow! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ As the madmen call callously out for the stars to burn, And as the holy men fumble and stutter ...

Hello there, Casanova! Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I agree that after reading a lyric sheet of "We Don't Talk Anymore" that this sounds eerily like that song. Some ...

Hello there, BlueRoses15! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I think my main issue with this may be the readability. It's very choppy, and the punctuation is very ...

Hello there, Sam29! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I would like to start off by saying, welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying your stay here, and ...

Hello there, DivergentDemigod! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ There's a lot of potential in this, but I still think your poem has a lot of room to ...

Hello there, Casanova! This is Moonwatcher here with another review! ^-^ Old, stone walls with a very rickety wooden door at the front. The inside was only two floors, with ...

Hello there, Trashcan123! This is Moonwatcher here with a review. I'd suggest changing the rating of this poem to 18+, due to the very extreme language that is frequent throughout ...

Hello there, JuneIparis! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ You've provided the reader with an amazing story idea and a rough idea of what will come next, which ...

Hello there, Torshachatterjee! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I spy with my little eye, a rhyme scheme at the near end of the poem. I personally suggest ...