I really like this poem. The way you use advanced words in poem really elevates it in my opinion and gives it even more imagery than it already had. Your poem has a very great start with the opening line and that caught my attention which is what a great poem should do. I really like how you ended the poem with part of the title this is a tactic I used while writing poems and think it's a great way to end. So, overall this is a really great poem and i really look forward to your future work
Points: 12
Reviews: 5
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