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nice i liked reading it, and i guess i enjoyed it. liked the pausing throughout it...felt like a song. good job though

erm this is good, don't understand the tiny sentances you used, didn't really understand what you were trying to put across. however good poem and nice words.

this is an interesting poem, nice words, good meaning, nice title, one thing "Maybe you could so the same with me" im guessing you mean do, a little bit of ...

thsi is nice, i like. erm...didnt really understand what it was about hmmm...but maybe i need to read it again to get a deeper insight to what you are talking ...

its good...i dont think you should have put (16+) in the title coz there is no actual descrptions of sex or anything. its a good poem, but seems a bit ...

woow. this was lovely. taken back...love the words you use, nice choice of them. i hae nothing bad to say about it lol. this is really good... *taken back*

this was nice...didnt actually know what it was entirley taking guesses but im failing lol. (it's morning gah!). but i like it, nice scheme used. i like the ending, and ...

this was nice, enjoyed reading it, cant think of anythign to say at the moment

ahh thesauras, a writers best friend. (grr, i cant spell today!)

oh yeah, i forgot to add that dont really think the title relates to the poem THAT well maybe you should add something that will interest the readers, but thats ...

i enjoyed reading this. nice theme and a very nice ending, good choice of words, keep up the good job :) i actually ahve nothing bad to say about it

i didnt understand it, but i still liked the poem anyway, good choice of words. I thought this was really good though, i dontthink its bad at all, keep up ...

wow, this was very nice i liked this alot actually, such a s nice title as well (i have a thing for kewl titles btw). i have nothing bad to ...

maybe you should have made what you told me the poem was about a little bit clearer than i would have understood

erm...they were good i kinda like them alday i didnt actually capture the true meaning of them, however i think you did a good job and keep writing :)