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In the first segment the player seems young and since the music sends shivers down their back I would say that it is sending all kinds of endorphins throughout their ...

Howdy! Before I comment about the content I would like to provide some suggestions for the grammar aspect of the piece. :) Here it is: "The Chains of a sinner ...

Howdy! One thing that I noticed initially is that the way that the first segment of text ends does not quite match the flow of the rest of the poem. ...

Hello, fellow writer. really, I enjoyed your story. It was brief, fast-paced, and for the most part. Entertaining. personally, though, I could not help but see a comparison to the ...

Hello there, fellow writer. Anyhow, as far as my opnion goes here, I was a bit apprehensive on what exactly you were trying to convey in the poem. Like another ...

Mother, Do you know what I see in you? A book, a broach, a pearl or shoe? This makes little sense as a follow up question to the one starting ...

The protagonists is an extreme rambler and rather annoys me. I'm the type of reader that prefers scenic description over being in a charcater's head for too long, so that's ...

You finally posted a part three. I heard Celeste say from behind me, “You have a blocked nose or something?” Does Celeste just speak with extremly bad grammar or was ...

Hey, rasca, here I am for my reviewing revival. Like I told you, it's been so .long since I've done one of these. The scent of ammonia from the streak ...

Hello there. My, my, what a short piece. “We’re going to have to make this quick!” said Haymitch, slowly entering the Everdeen home. “Okay, I’ll be in and out, quick ...

Hey, man. Yeah, like Gryphon said, it is highly unlikely that a mere dozen people could bring a foreign planet to life. It worked for the Bible. First Adam and ...

Hello Ranger. Around 4:00 yesterday, I began doing a review of this story when the internet cut off. It frustrated me, but I'm over it now. So here I am. ...

Alright, I won't be an evil reviewer. At least, I hope not. Either way, here is what I have to say: *Um, yeah... that rhyme was not intentional . ;) ...

Hehe, you're going to kill off the sparklies too? I did that a long time ago. But it was more of a military story, of all things. *Shrugs* I made ...

Fahrenheit 451 is a short, yet mesmerizing novel. Though I rather miss a certain charcter who dies way too early in the tale. It's sp sad. But the insane world ...