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The poem kind of repeats with the I’s and the me’s and the you’s I kind of got stuck on that fact. And I didn’t get why you stopped after ...

Overall the poem/letter is choppy and doesn’t have a very good flow. And it’s kind of confusing because of the jumping “from side to side” where your on one topic ...

Ashley here with a review What’s with the spaces between dance at the end of the first line, and the spaces in bettween melt and tighter? Is that supposed to ...

I have tried many times to write a pome about highschool, but none of them have been like this. What I mean is, this poem goes more in depth with ...

Hey Ashley here with a review (of sorts) First of all when you say “That I am” it doesn’t flow with the rest of the paragraph, it kind of made ...

Is this about self harm?? Im just going to go with that..... This poem correctly portays the hardhsips of a self-harmer and the demons that one has within and thr ...

I have recently written a prom sort of like this, well more like on the same type of topic... ish... but going onto the review. The poem was deep and ...

I was kind of confused at the end, does that mean that the human will light himself on fire just to get rid of the demon?? Ok.... back to the ...

Thanks for writing this. I couldn’t put boredom into words but you did it wonderfully. Great job. There are boring people all over and I like how this portrays the ...

Wow. Just WOW. What is this about? Smoking???? I’m just going ti go with that. This is an awesome portrayal of what smoking does to a person and how the ...

WOW. Just wow. This has so much feeling so much pain. I can’t describe what this meant to me for someone to not be afraid to write a poem about ...

OH MY GOD. What have you done to me? These are totally relatable and they portay the feeling of the majority while still being unique to a certain group of ...

Wow. Just WOW I can’t believe how much feeling you put into this poem. Using your own feelings and your experiences is very brave. I love the flow and the ...

Hmm. My feelings about this poem. I don’t know. I honestly don’t know. Im not a feminist but im not not a feminist im neutral I guess, but this peom ...

Good work. This story was very interesting, and went deeper into the feelings of the characters, on a sidenote were you than main guy? It seemed that you were because ...