Ashley123

I haven't read any of the previous chapters, but even still I could understand what was happening in this chapter. Good job. Your plot and characters seem really strong, and ...

This short story was very good. I have never really read anything like it, it was very entertaining to read. I did notice one or two mistakes but nothing severe. ...

I liked this story a lot. It was an awesome piece about your life growing up on a ranch. I loved hearing about all of your friends and family members, ...

I really like this story!!! It is packed with so much deep down emotion, that just makes me nearly cry as I am reading it. You use very descriptive details, ...

I thought that this was a cool short story about change. I love how it was written in the form of an interview. It really made the story more interesting, ...

First off welcome to YWS. I'm always happy to review new member's work. Now there were many mistakes that I had noticed in your chapter. First of all this chapter ...

First off. Welcome to YWS. I hope that you enjoy your writing experience on this site. Now for the review. I liked how you did an essay about friendship and ...

This is a pretty good start on the first chapter in your novel. I would say, personally, that you should make the chapter just a few pages longer. Simply because ...

This is a very good and descriptive short story, that really gives me a glimpse of that storm that you had endured that day. I liked how you used descriptive ...

Wow. This poem was amazing. I loved how it was so sad and packed with emotion. I literally felt like I was going to cry while hearing you portray your ...

This is defiantly an interesting story line. Honestly, I'm a little confused as to what's going on here, I just don't quite get it. But, I do like the plot ...

This was very cool. I have never really reviewed lyrics before but I thought that I should give it a try. This piece has a lot of emotion and feelings ...

I told you that I'd check out your work and get back to you, and so far I am completely and utterly impressed. I really like this story's plot an ...

Wow. I have never seen ANYTHING like this before on this site or anywhere. I never knew that you could post artwork on here, I thought that it was for ...

This was defiantly an interesting story about a dinosaur. But mostly it was defiantly funny and entertaining to read. I also really liked how you got some of the lines ...