AshStyles22

Hi, I'm Ash. Welcome to YWS. First of all your poem was really good.But it could be way better. Compared to all the works here, this was nothing (sorry if ...

Awww, this is kinda cute. A school girl, experiencing lesbians. LOL, did that sound funny? Will wait for the next chapter. There are some spelling mistakes I wanted to point ...

Thanks for this piece a lot. It really helped.I'm going through this situation myself, and I've already cut my hands about 17 times. I wanna die. I'm sure you would ...

OMG this isn't a disaster at all! It is beautiful...the nature of your describing, the way you put the words, the length,the rhyming but not rhyming type poem of your ...

If you're a guy, please dedicate this song to me! I love it, after I came here, it's the best thing I've read until now. No one ever dedicated me ...

I love it. Perfect. Never read a poem like this before. Sometimes, your parents' love and agreement is all you need. Ambition, pain,caring,fear,regret. So much in just a single fave ...

Wow! This is amazing! The poem touched my heart. I simply loved the way you described everything, so complex yet so simple. Many people write about love,death and so on, ...

This is beautiful. The poem was really written with a lot of heart, which is really sweet. But I think the following areas needed improvement. First of all, since the ...

I simply ADORE it. The way you describe is naturally be-yoo-tiful. The idea is very unique, to compare yourself to a pretty rose, and now a hopeless person. This is ...

Awww, very sweet poem. has a good message in the end, my favourite part is: "Hades himself, has longed for this frock, Though his home is hot and steaming. Sad ...

I'm really sorry for your friend..I know it hurts a lot. Sing this song to him, try to make him feel better. I'm sure it will melt his heart. After ...

I'm in love with these lyrics. My favorite part is "And tell her that I still love her. And that I'm hers forever. And ever, Forever and ever we'll be ...

Good poem, nicely tried. What you try to make the reader understand isn't really clear, and words are difficult. Like on a misty day, you see things but not perfectly. ...

Ok, so let me start from saying that this poem was really touching. Flawlessly described, it makes the reader clearly understand what the writer says. But since it is a ...

No, you can't improve this Harshita,according to me. It's lovely. It matches with my life precisely. Flawlessly said what every girl wants in romance, this is a fave of mine. ...