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Re: Twenty-four Steps
There you are at the evening’s horizon, Looking down on these fields of mine. I wonder what do you expect to dine, When you hide so behind our sun. I ...
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Re: out of my league
everyone’s out of my league I dont think that I will ever reach all the standards set up for me be it from my beliefs or the ones projected on ...
Nov 1, 2021 -
Re: i exist but im considered useless
Surrounding ocean with a pale gray sky the lonely iceberg that feels the cold loud crickets make my ears bleed deep middle child I am, nothing more or less I'm ...
Nov 1, 2021 -
Re: Bruises
This. Was. Amazing. I got CHILLS just reading this. Thank you for taking this story from Yarn and publishing it here. This was a great way to end the spooky ...
Nov 1, 2021 -
Re: The Dark Side of the Moon
The trees angrily whipped their branches in the wind, stopping only for a brief moment to heave a creaking sigh before furiously whipping their branches around again. I loved the ...
Nov 1, 2021 -
Re: Light
Power can be used for good or for bad. It all depends on the person you give it to. Sometimes good people can turn bad when given power. Sometimes bad ...
Oct 25, 2021 -
Re: Red, the color I saw
It was short, but somewhat meaningful. I wasn't entirely sure what the meaning was, but I know that it had one. Imagine a mass murder in which everything has turned ...
Oct 25, 2021 -
Re: A Cringey Cloud of Tears | First Piece's First Lines
I loved this. I think we can all look back at our old works and chuckle. Whether they were good or bad, it is nice looking back at what we ...
Oct 23, 2021 -
Re: Nostalgia Trip
This. Was. AMAZING. I've never read a story quite like this. The complex characters, the real identity of Mr. O, the truth behind Jeremy's father. You've given us an emotional ...
Oct 23, 2021 -
Re: The Attic
I got a nostalgia feel from this poem. Some things were old, some things were new. But one thing we can't deny is how we all get older. We leave ...
Oct 22, 2021 -
Re: The clown and the little girl (SHORT STORY)
This is a very heart-warming story. A little girl overcame her fear of clowns because she realized that not all of them were scary. She met a kind one who ...
Oct 22, 2021 -
Re: Tell Her I was not Scared; Tell Him I know he was Brave
Two lovers who never got the chance to say goodbye. Wishing, praying that the other knew how they felt. Little do they both know that the other knew how they ...
Oct 22, 2021 -
Re: The Memory House
Grief and letting go. I'll be honest, I questioned whether or not Cecelia would sell the house, but I'm glad she did. She lived through the good, the bad, and ...
Oct 20, 2021 -
Re: You. Love. Her. More.
A child who constantly feels like they aren’t good enough for their mother. They see other children with their mothers and wonder what they’ve done wrong. A question that no ...
Oct 16, 2021 -
Re: Please don’t hurt me
Good poem. I was a bit confused at the ending, but that could just be my interpretation. I could feel the fear and despair of the main character. She literally ...
Oct 16, 2021
