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Re: The Queen of Dolls
Dang, Snoink, way to disturb me. I actually had Addie over my shoulder when I first started reading this, but as soon as I read, “You like that, don’t you, ...
May 16, 2006 -
Re: Voices V - What have we missed?
When I first saw that you'd posted another Voices on the same day I posted an Untitled, I was like, holy crackers and cheese, dagnabbit! But I love you and ...
May 13, 2006 -
Re: Ahem.. Ahem.. Roald Dahl is here!!
I've mostly read the ones Bobo mentioned. I loved Matilda , The Twits , and The Witches most of all, though. I remember being quite afraid of The Witches but ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Empress: The Triad (New Material 7/28/06)
Ha ha, much awesomeness, Dono. I loved the whole "there's no one sexier thing." And the ninjas. And the fact that the YWS now features a story with Empress Kat, ...
May 4, 2006 -
Re: Seeing Red
YES, BUBBLES! This rocks. I was completely not expecting it, but this poem blew me away. I liked the use of the pet names, because it seemed to conjure images ...
Apr 20, 2006 -
Re: He Walked Among the Unspoiled Rushes
Ooh, what a lovely piece. I had to read it twice to really get into it, but I loved the smooth, hazy feeling the poem gave overall. I liked the ...
Apr 20, 2006 -
Re: Neighbor
I too was confused at the use of the word "bike." The word "eye" also seemed somewhat ambiguous. Other than those two minor errors, I found this to be an ...
Apr 18, 2006 -
Re: How did I ever sleep alone
I can't believe I never commented on this... I remember reading it a long time ago and really liking it, so I'm not sure why I didn't post a comment. ...
Apr 18, 2006 -
Re: graveyards and roses (me and you)
Another nice one, Jack. It seems so dark and creepy, but I suppose that's kind of the point... lol... I have one friend who's memorized you know i'd sing for ...
Apr 12, 2006 -
Re: Voices IV: We miss you...
Yay, Dusky, another Voices! I really love these pieces because she doesn't seem at all crazy; in fact, Jenn has so many conflicting emotions in her, just like any normal ...
Apr 12, 2006 -
Re: Away in a Cave
Ha ha, very amusing. And DQ, are you possibly thinking of politicaltoons.com? Or maybe it's .org. I haven't been there in ages. My friends and I were obsessed with the ...
Apr 7, 2006 -
Re: Antithesis to Scopes Monkey Trial
I agree with Snoink, though I've never been able to pinpoint it as well as she did just now. I think it's because I'm blinded by my love and ridiculously ...
Apr 5, 2006 -
Re: A Question of Loyalty
I love your poetry, bob. I think what I enjoyed most about this were those neat literary illusions and the way the line breaks seemed effortless and everything flowed one ...
Mar 30, 2006 -
Re: Integrate This! (Now a YWS Fanfiction!)
Wooo hooo!!! Well, I have to be honest... I start skimming once you get really into the gun stuff, but other than that, this rocks Ari's socks. Now when do ...
Mar 27, 2006 -
Re: Only A Lost Child
Oh, lovely poem. I'm not much good at critiquing poems, but I'm in a poem-y mood this morning so I figured I'd take a crack at it. You, however, completely ...
Mar 25, 2006
