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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: you know i'd sing for you

    All of your revivals of old threads has made me strangely nostalgic, so I decided to come and leave another comment on my favorite poem of yours. Remember I used ...

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: Flowers for the Wake

    Just wanted to make a note saying I'd read this. I'll come back and give you my full comments this weekend when I have time. This thing just oozes potential. ...

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Cinderella Parody

    This was so cute. I love how Cinderella is just a perfect, precious, helpless little thing - just like in the regular story - but the fairy godmother is completely ...

    Aug 27, 2007
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Trevor [Deceased]

    Hahaha, this was very cute. And a true story too, I'm assuming? (It is in Non-Fiction, after all.) I'm glad you were able to find some humor in your situation. ...

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: FREAKY SPAGHETTI

    DANNY Because it is a catchy line that sizzles of sexual tension and makes it clear that I am a prick, thus making my character have a flaw. Hahahahaha, YES. ...

    Aug 19, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Thousand Dancing Kites

    I will come back and comment when I'm coherent (as we have just discussed that it is two in the morning my time ;)), but I just wanted to leave ...

    Aug 19, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: allie68: lol ok cya.

    I really like the idea of having a webcam used here, but, like Snoink said, you'd have to break away from the strictly back and forth IM format. But I ...

    Jul 30, 2007
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Story Deleted

    I liked this too. It's the kind of piece I'm a total sucker for. :P I always imagine this is one of the nice things about being married, though, so ...

    Jul 28, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Break In: a YWS fanfiction [Part Two added]

    You have my fandom too! I think you and Grif should have some kind of badge or something, as the most famous of YWS fanfic writers. :P I loved "I ...

    Jul 24, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Paperweight

    This was really neat! I thought the simplicity worked well. You were succinct (which I can always appreciate) but used your adjectives very well. The only thing I could really ...

    Jul 22, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows

    I thought it was brilliant. Rowling is an incredible storyteller; I would kill to be able to weave a story as masterfully as her. It took me somewhere between seven ...

    Jul 22, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Your Coat of Arms is the Lion

    Oh, wow, I really liked this. I used to be a complete sucker for this kind of stuff, but after I got off a "Chicken Soup for the Soul" binge ...

    Jul 19, 2007
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Queen of Dolls

    I was just reading over this again, being impressed by your skills of succinct-ness and such, but when I read your comment about her being 5 or 6, I found ...

    Jul 15, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: it's just the small print

    Hmm... change it to be more poetic, but don't change the words... that would be interesting. :P Anyhow, I really enjoyed this, EBM! Well, maybe enjoy is the wrong word... ...

    Jul 6, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Divorce sucks

    If this is something you've actually experienced, make us feel it as you feel it. My parents are divorced, and what you've talked about in the poem touches on the ...

    Jun 23, 2007


'Tis the season to shovel enormous amounts of watermelon into your mouth while hunched over the cutting board like a dehydrated vampire that hasn't fed on blood in four hundred years and the only viable substitute is this questionable Christmas-colored fruit.
— Ari11