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Re: He was the Past, You're my Future
Hi there! This is 567ajt, here to review this already-reviewed poem. Doesn't that sound nice? ;) Let's take it step by step. "He was a bad day, A rainy afternoon, ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Inhumanity.
Hello Clarity :) Nice to meet you. I am Adam, or AJ as I am colloquially known to the masses. Let's look at this piece, which you entitled Inhumanity. I ...
Dec 17, 2012 -
Re: Hush now, we don't want any accidents.
Yo yo yo. This is I, by request. :) I understand this is unfinished and has no name, but I shall review it anyway as it is. I understand you've ...
Dec 2, 2012 -
Re: Red Rimmed: Prologue- rewritten
Hey hey hey Clar! Sorry for the huge delay. Well, I hope this review will make up for it. I shall structure the review by stating what I liked the ...
Nov 27, 2012 -
Re: A game of hide and seek...
Hey there :) 567ajt, here by request. Let's not dillydally and get straight into it. I will review stanzas that I think are really good, and those that need some ...
Nov 13, 2012 -
Re: A Master Who Toyed Me
Hey Cooks 8) 567ajt here, to review something! *shock horror* Let's not mess around, and get straight into it: "The morning birds chirped. The sun has turned cold, you bit ...
Oct 29, 2012 -
Re: Perfect Time
Good morning dogs :) This is 567ajt, and I have come to review this poem. I am surprised that this work hasn't been reviewed yet. I really like it, and ...
Oct 29, 2012 -
Re: the breadth
Hi Persy :) 567ajt here again. Sorry if I appear overly attached :P I am just a really big fan of your work, tis all. I won't go too much ...
Oct 29, 2012 -
Re: thanks for the wings
Hai Sparks :) 567ajt here. I don't believe I have ever reviewed a poem of yours. If I have, I don't remember :P This review is *loooooooooooooooong* overdue, and I ...
Oct 23, 2012 -
Re: My Child
Hey Silver :) I have come to review your poem. Despite it being short, I really liked it. So this review will take it step-by-step. "These are the moments that ...
Oct 5, 2012 -
Re: Broken Ripples
Hi bluebird :) 567ajt here, about to review this poem of yours. I must add, I think your avatar is cute :D So, where's the comments on this piece? That's ...
Sep 25, 2012 -
Re: Hold You In Song
Hi there :) I am 567ajt, and I have come to review this piece of work. Two things: 1) Yay! Another lyricist! I specialize in song lyrics, so it's nice ...
Sep 22, 2012 -
Re: Cascades of Time (Chp 2)
Hi there :) By request, I am here to review chapter 2 of your novel. As you probably already know, I am 567ajt, and in favor of your review of ...
Sep 22, 2012 -
Re: Silent Moment
Hi there :) I'm here to review your poem, because I'm nice :D I am 567ajt, if you want my name for future reference. May I say that I really ...
Sep 21, 2012 -
Re: Are We?
Hi there. 567ajt here, about to review your poem. This is fairly short, but I will try and review it my best. First off, let me tell you something. I ...
Sep 16, 2012