Ardor

Heggo!!! :) This is 567ajt, your fiancé, here to review this wonderful piece of work. Now I have read this work already as a blog, but (as predicted) it reads ...

Heya! This is me again, getting around to the third work you posted yesterday. This one, for some reason, reminds me of my own writing to an extent. The themes ...

Ahoy! This is 567ajt, everyone's favourite dipstick, here to review this poem. You posted three new works yesterday and I reviewed one of them. I think it's time to look ...

Heya. This is I, who you may/may not know (your boyfriend ;)) and I have decided to review this poem first. As a starting point, I do like the title ...

Although I was aware of what this article entailed- you showed me an excerpt- I didn't expect the links you made, and I certainly didn't expect to relate to it, ...

Hola!!! You may not have met me before (my sexy baby ;)) but I am 567ajt. I have come to review this rather titillating and pass-me-the-fan-things-are-suddenly-very-warm poem :) I shall ...

Ola! This is 567ajt, and I have been summoned to review this rather confessional work of yours. I can tell this will be a work of constant changes, as the ...

This is a good poem, with references to self-loathing and shame. Can you hear me now? Am I speaking loud enough for you? My voice is nothing more than a ...

Confessions in writing are important. I imagine this as a monologue, perhaps even a letter of apology. The way these words wave in and out show an element of true ...

Shalom! This is 567ajt here, and I'm here to review this poem of yours. As I have noticed with your other works, such as The Silence and Pain, you like ...

Hello! This is 567ajt, here to review this poem. I shall review one stanza at a time. I’ve always followed the signs and they’ve never led me wrong, though the ...

Yo, bud! 567ajt here, looking to review this chapter from your novel. I like your title, it's very basic and is blunt. Makes me know exactly what will happen :) ...

Yo yo yo! 567ajt here again, here to take a look at this short excerpt. I am not completely sure what this is, but I'll read it as a monologue. ...

Hey hey hey! :D 567ajt here, and I have just arrived for Review Day. Your poem is the first I will review today! :) So, let's get down to the ...

Mkay. Hi Robert. This is 567ajt, overseer of many a skinny White British drama queen, here to review this short story of yours, entitled The Wife. Why you've decided to ...