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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bus Catching

    I have now reached what is, quite possibly, one of your most popular works of recent memory. This poem is a fitting metaphor for insanity, which is essentially doing the ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Delight Sky

    Ahhh hunny. You have done it again. Another impressive poem with multiple interpretations attached to it. On first impression, an observation of the sky, but what if it's slightly more ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: Warped Sonnetium

    Hey hun :) I am here to review these poems of yours. They are very good, in a nutshell. :) So, I like the combination of the words sonnet (i.e. ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Periapt

    Heggo :) It's MasterGrieves, the big ol' man in the middle, always talkin' like Doolittle. :) The meaning of the title is an amulet, a good luck charm, etc. I ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Battles

    Yo! I am MasterGrieves, big ol' man in the middle, and I love to talk 'bout Doolittle. :) So this is a contribution to the DD movement, and a mighty ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Chateau Rouge

    Ahhhh yes! A rewriting of Suicide Blonde, hopefully to be extended as a novel. Before I get into depths with this specific chapter, I want to address my feelings of ...

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Narrative Re: Part 3 - Misplaced Trust

    Awwww, I can relate to this part so much. :( I feel so sorry for your character. :/ I just...I just hate John! So much! I should have seen the ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Narrative Re: Part 2 - A Mental Man

    Heggo again hun :D I am here to review Part Two of your short story. This takes place right after the events of the last chapter, so good continuity. :) ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Part 1 - Think Like A...

    Yo hun! :D I am, as you know, 567ajt, and I am here to review this stunning rewrite of an unfinished novel. Here is me hoping that you finish this, ...

    Jun 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Disney

    This will not necessarily be a review of the technicality of the poem, but more of a discussion about the issues raised in the poem. I will try and keep ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: Creativity is A Huge Recycling Process

    Heggo my pretty :) This is 567ajt, though by now I don't think I need to introduce myself to you. :D Anyway, onto this work. This work has opened up ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Humor Re: Mitchell: Everyone Must Read

    Hello fuckfaced readers. Hello Mitchell! :) How are you my furry friend? This is so you. :) Being the next Shakespeare is easy if you know how. And I know ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Humor Re: Episode 1: Leaving London Behind

    Hola! It is I, 567ajt, your lovely fiancée, here to review the first of (hopefully) many episodes of your novel, entitled Hinterland. The use of the term "hinterland" is accurate, ...

    Apr 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Each Servant

    As soon as you linked me this poem, I just had to review it. You explained how this poem links to the idea of desensitisation over the glory of death. ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Idiot Boxed Life

    Hola! This is your fiancée, here once again to review a poem of yours. Now, this reminds me of a work by a YWSer named pengtingking (who is now known ...

    Mar 28, 2014


i could be a morning person if morning happened around noon.
— Fern