ArcticMonkey

Hi Lacy! Right, I thought this was an... interesting concept. I mean certainly not something I've seen before, which is always a good thing really. I want to especially add ...

Hi again, Dreamy! I'm going to get straight to what I think could be better, and then I'll give n overall impression of everything. My first concern is you don't ...

'Ello Pumpkin, here to review your poem! This is a topic that is rather hard to talk about, however from what you've got, you're actually done really well! I think ...

Hi zasaz! Well. This is something. I don't want to sound too harsh but it's not all that exciting. In fact, it sounds more like some sort of rant really ...

Hi jordin! For a general story idea, this was really good! I may be a bit biased, because I'm a sucker for anything Lord of the Rings related, but this ...

Hey again, Gooner! Here to review this story. I really liked the fact that you used the somewhat cliche idea of living in a dream world and being a bit ...

Hi Antonio! Here to review your story :) What I liked about this is that the pacing was pretty good, you seemed to have varied sentence lengths which is great! ...

Hi Layal! Here to review your lyrics. Right, now I did like these lyrics. There were quite a few cliched ideas which I'll talk about later, but generally these lyrics ...

Hey tigg! You wanted a review on this piece, you got it ;) Okay, now bare in mind I'm not really familiar. I've written a few in the past for ...

Hi Haley! Here to review this piece. Okay, so what startled me at first is the fact that it's all in one big clump! And then when I read it ...

Hello, Aley! here to review your song! Now, you say these are the first lyrics you've written? If this is the case this is majorly good, like seriously. When I ...

Hiya, Gabbi! Here to review your story. I thought this was a really cute idea. Having horses as the main characters was a really nice touch, I've always been a ...

Hsarver! I have returned to review some of your lyrics x3 Okay, so what I really liked about this was I guess the message and the religious links. I thought ...

Hey, Grenade! I'm Arc, here to review your story. When I first read this I thought 'yay, a sea story!' Okay, so it's not exactly a sea story, but it's ...

Yo, cj! Here to review :) Right so it is very obvious that you have a lovely way of writing! It's very... sophisticated to say the least, and is really ...