ArcticMonkey

Hi guineapiggirl, here to review your story! I really did enjoy reading this, I think you have some really cool ideas in this. When I at first saw it was ...

Paige! Here for the next part :) I thought this was a good next part of the story. I liked how there were some more characters introduced and we see ...

Heya Paige, I have returned for the next chapter :) What I liked about this chapter is that there was more descriptions, especially of the mansion- I didn't think there ...

Hey Paige! Here to review as requested, so sorry about the delay but I am here now- I definitely agree with the other in saying you've got a fabulous way ...

Hi Dhendon! Okay, so this was certainly the most exciting chapter. As I've been banging on about in previous chapter reviews, something big happened! It was all very intriguing and ...

Chaaapter Seeven! Ah, the lovey dovey smushy mushy stuff has been mentioned. Yuck :P. At times, you did a good job of keeping your original style and talk about love ...

Hello again! Right, it seems I have made a mistake here. I accidentally skipped this chapter initially, and reviewed chapter 6 thinking it was chapter 5. So firstly, apologies for ...

Dhendon! Here for Chapter 6 (you just can't get rid of me ;)) What I really liked about this chapter, and something that I thought was lacking from previous chapters ...

Hey Dhendon, here to review chapter four! Well I agree with the other's in saying that this was a cool turn of events, and not really something I was expecting. ...

Hey Dhendon! I'm sure you know the drill by now ;) What I liked about this is I finally feel it's getting some depth with the link to the video ...

Hi Dhendon! I hath returned for Chapter Two- So as in the last chapter, a strong point is your style. You have a really good way of including humour and ...

Hiya Dhendon! Here for the review as requested, sorry for the delay~ Okay, so starting with strong points, I thought your characterisation was really good. I thought the interior monologue ...

Hiya Auxi! Here finally for that review, sorry for the delay. I'm going to start straight with the things that I liked. I think the strong point of this is ...

Hiya umaima! Here for part two of your Secret Santa reviews :3 Right, so my first thought about this was that it was quite cute and sweet. I also thought ...

Hi umaima! Here to review your poem :) A few to get things started! Was you'r your arms in which The choi c e is yours Okay, so what I ...