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Hi twinn I'm backkkk. Let's get reviewing shall we? My cousin said something once to me. "Everybody worships." And I realized it's true. He worshipped god, others worship love, and ...

Whoa. I can see the contrast between Karissa, and Ysabelle from a different short story. Ysabelle is sweet, and makes sure to show even a little bit of appreciation for ...

This poem is amazing! I really felt the pain that your ex had caused you and happness that was torn apart by them. I hope you truly find someone worthy ...

This is a great and heartfelt chapter. With Simon accepting that Jarid can make his own decisions adds a wonderful touch to him as character. Shadow and Jarid's moment in ...

Hello again! I noiticed that in the third paragraph, when explaining the crest it states, "A human standing on the back of a submissive dragon, holding a shield in one ...

I really liked this chapter! I think it's intresting to have Jarid beat the cocky Dominic in the first two rounds, but quickly be beaten in the third. This adds ...

Sorry I haven't been able to read one of these chapters in a while! I really like that Steven helps Jarid under no obligation, but still leaves some details out, ...

I really like this chapter! The meeting with Airel gives some individually to her, with her acting with Jaird as an equal, and the idea of her basically preventing him ...

(Sorry for the basically spam lol I really love this) I really like how much older Shadow and Jarid seem! I think it is really intresting that Jarid can use ...

I really like this! The amount of detail you've put into all the looks of the dragons really helps make a picture in my head, and the surroundings are really ...

I can really feel the emotion those "friend" put you through. You know what I say? Frick them. If they are dumb enough to hurt someone for laughs, than they ...

Hi! I really like the suspense in this chapter! You could really feel Subject 17's fear and slight sillyness! I really love Supject 5's emotion and how it is conveyed! ...