Antares

Before I Die was an awful, awful book. I can't believe I got all the way through it. I also can't believe people don't like To Kill a Mockingbird. I ...

I like this. Just a few things though... The unknown figure, dressed in robes of majestic violet, glides across the corridor, effortlessly, a fatal grin upon his face. He has ...

Me too! All my friends are Twilight fanatics or weirdos as I like to call them. :) Sheesh. They talk about it EVERY day! I don't know what the big ...

Just so you know, it's a general 'rule' that you give two reviews before you submit something. Anyways, on with the review. Yes, you heard correctly. I didn't hear anything: ...

He got silence in return. They were waiting for more, what his next move would be. He wiped his brow, making sure that they didn't see how nervous he was. ...

“Lynn!” Lynn’s mother called from downstairs. She was always such a grump[s].[/s] , e specially to Lynn. Do you think grump is the right word to describe her, considering what ...

First things first: take a new paragraph for each new speaker. :D Now, on with the review... Purple smoke fills the ruins of an abandoned city ; the sound[s]s[/s] of ...

Hmm, it's a good idea... Their parents were not sure if it was a good idea for Jill to get involved with Cameron because of her being deaf, Cody thought ...

Woo! New chapter! Let's get started then... Third Day Last night, after bumping the stinky, hot belly of the metal monster, huh? the Man let me outside. I saw a ...

I actually like this. I've read a few stories from the POV of animals before but the main difference is that this one seems to make more sense. The dog ...

Hi Olivia! You're five years older than me and I already feel that you should take no notice of anything I say. But, alas, I've started now so I might ...

It's a bit short to say the least. I suppose you will be uploading more soon? It’s been fifty years now[s],[/s] since James left. He was a wise man, like ...

Chapter 4 Redeemer Something smacked against the creature on top of me. Her teeth jerked out of my skin as she flew backwards. Snarling erupted in the distance. A fire ...

The first day of our 'relationship' was perfect. Absolutely, incredibly, 100% perfect! We chatted and got to know each other a little better and flirted a bit. Some people congratulated ...

Blood. It was all I could smell, all I could think about. I knew there was something that I was sent here to do, something important, but right now my ...