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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Beaten Down

    This is beautifully written, thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us. I find no faults with this work of poetry and wish you good luck ...

    Jun 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: From Past to Present

    Thanks for comment, this really encourages me to keep going.

    Jun 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: From Past to Present

    Thanks so much!

    Jun 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: One Man for Himself - Chapter 1: The Flight

    Thanks for the advice! I will try to keep this in mind.

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: One Man for Himself - Chapter 1: The Flight

    How could I hate you? Thanks for the advice and I'll keep these things in mind when writing chapter 2/a intro.

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Fire & Blood Chapter 1

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    This was an excellent piece of work that I enjoyed reading even if it was an easy read. It has an interesting plot that I believe that you can take ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Marionette

    Swag

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    This is a strong piece of work and I really appreciate someone who gets this. You wrote about something so controversial and put it so simply I'm just amazed. You ...

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Delusion

    This made me wanna cry! But It's true that that happens to us sometimes without us even noticing it. Slowly dying from the inside from things like Cigarettes and Alcohol. ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Delusion

    This made me wanna cry! But It's true that that happens to us sometimes without us even noticing it. Slowly dying from the inside from things like Cigarettes and Alcohol. ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Delusion

    This made me wanna cry! But It's true that that happens to us sometimes without us even noticing it. Slowly dying from the inside from things like Cigarettes and Alcohol. ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Bright

    Amazing, I have read Night as well and you have described it perfectly

    May 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: Goofy

    Nice Poem, It flows easily and is very descriptive.

    May 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Lost in Love

    It was a lovely poem, describes my life perfectly!

    May 21, 2013


A big mountain of sugar is too much for one man. I can see now why God portions it out in those little packets.
— Homer Simpson