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Re: From Afar.
Hello hello ^^ Awesome poetry again! Let's check it part by part (aka my new favourite way to review poems lol) "I saw your smile. Not a normal one. A ...
May 5 -
Re: From Afar.
Hello hello ^^ Awesome poetry again! Let's check it part by part (aka my new favourite way to review poems lol) "I saw your smile. Not a normal one. A ...
May 5 -
Re: The Urge
Thankyou for clarifying!!
May 5 -
Re: perhaps
Welcome
May 4 -
Re: perhaps
Hiii ^^ First of all, welcome to YWS, second of all, awesome poem!!!!
May 4 -
Re: My dearest Who..?
Ah I see, thanks for clarifying! ^^
May 3 -
Re: A Sky Full of Stars
Hello! Your poem has bewitched me, what I mean is, it's beautiful! "In a sky full of stars, shining in the midnight, I choose you. You are my star that ...
May 1 -
Re: Assault (SA)
I'm so sorry you had to go through that, the poem is shattering as a reader but also devastatingly astounding. I hope you're safe and okay now.
May 1 -
Re: bzzzzzzzzbzzzzzzzbzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Apr 29 -
Re: The Urge
Beautiful, you alright?
Apr 24 -
Re: It's that simple
Ahhhh tqsm for reviewing!!!
Apr 22 -
Re: An ordinary encounter
Thankyou so much for taking your time to review my prose, I'll try to improve it!
Apr 18 -
Re: An ordinary encounter
Thankyou so much for reviewing my work! I haven't written a prose in about 7 years now so yeah it's a sort of rough beginning, so your suggestions and corrections ...
Apr 17 -
Re: An ordinary encounter
Thankyou so much for analysing my prose, it was Insanely accurate to the actual interpretations, one thing I'd like to suggest is you look up what clouded leopards symbolise. Overall, ...
Apr 17 -
Re: An ordinary encounter
Thankyou for reviewing my work and pointing out the errors, it really helps me a lot! :))
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