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Re: summer #18
Dunno why but this poem makes me feel homesick for the city I lived in as a kid. It's so oddly poetic how curious children are about everything and this ...
Jun 5 -
Re: What Have I Become
I have to say, this wasn't just a poem, this was an experience. The way you expressed good grades like a friend just feels right. And then the lines hit ...
Jun 2 -
Re: Resent
Hello fellow poet! I hope you're doing well and I'm sorry that you have to go through this. This is the perfect example of turning pain into poetry and it's ...
May 31 -
Re: the same ghosts
Hii This poem makes me imagine a writer who hasn't moved on from their muse and continue writing about them as if possessed by it's spirit. I love the distinct ...
May 31 -
Re: I Can’t Find My Voice
Hello hello! Your poem is very simple yet beautifully written, so without much further ado, let's get into reviewing it, shall we? "Why is it so hard to speak? I ...
May 29 -
Re: i miss her
Wow This is beautiful! I like the way you formatted the poem like a list with emotional notes. When I read it, it reminds me of my childhood and my ...
May 28 -
Re: Lady Liberty
Hiii awesome poetry once again Woww you're so smartt :0 From what I'm seeing this is about the statue of Liberty (honestly I only have a general idea of the ...
May 27 -
Re: Prey
Hiii!! This poem reminds me of the quote "To be gorgeous, you must first be seen, but to be seen allows you to be hunted." from the book On Earth ...
May 26 -
Re: 5 things I see, 5 things I hear, 1 thing I feel..
Heyyy you're back to posting your awesome poems :D From what I'm seeing this poem is a unique take towards the common grounding exercise or the 5-4-3-2-1 method for anxiety, ...
May 25 -
Re: The 5 feeling of life.
Yearn is basically the absence of something needed. As Google says it, "To yearn is to have an intense, often wistful or melancholic desire for something, particularly something that is ...
May 24 -
Re: House in Nebraska
Hello! I see that you specialise in writing short but impactful poetry and I wasn't let down this time either. It's just something about the way that you write that ...
May 23 -
Re: Tesseract
Hello hello ^^ I rarely ever read sci-fi works so I thought why not give it a try? Personally, the poem is a little conceptionally unclear which is probably because ...
May 22 -
Re: It's Always Raining... Isn't It?
From a technical standpoint, I like the consistent rhyming and use of repetition. I feel like the rain here symbolises sorrow or inner bitterness. Here's my personal interpretation— "The rain ...
May 21 -
Re: The Waves
Short but crushing poetry I see. I believe this is about the final point of hopelessness in which a person finally accepts their doomed fate and carries it like a ...
May 20 -
Re: The Sun Always Finds A Way In
"The afternoon sun spies in Through drawn curtains and barred doors" I like the way you describe everything in this poem, it creates this heartwarming feeling along with a strong ...
May 19
