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Re: Aokigahara
Very emotional. An amazing piece. I enjoyed the occasional rhymes, that due to not being constant, created a very interesting effect. It had a good rhythm, which is important as ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Falcon
Beautiful work of poetry. I enjoyed how the layout was different from most pieces, and this captured my attention. The rhythm was very well presented, leaving a wonderful overall impression. ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: The Bridge ~ Into the Night
Firstly, I loved the formatting. It made me want to read it by just glancing at the screen. I expected something interesting, alluring and overall nice to read. And my ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: some nights
Really nice poem :) It is very emotional, as if you knew exactly who you were writing about, which I guess you did. I enjoy how there was no rhyme ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: The Adolescent Wind
Very emotional. Very powerful. It completely enveloped me in the scene. The smell, the sight, the feeling of raw emotion and empathy. I felt like I was a ghost who ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: I will not die a shell
Dear disgusting writer, It makes me sick to read such violent, pornographic, SATANIC 'art'. I did not find it enjoyable as I believe in our Lord and Saviour, Jesus Christ(or ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: My Body is Not Poetry
Such an beautiful way to describe ones body and all her insecurities. Everything is perfect. All of the descriptions, the rhythm, the emotion and the soul in the words. It ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: I see you
*Every breath you take Every move you make Every bond you break Every step you take I'll be watching you* Haha, reminded me of that song :) *stalker* All jokes ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: ----
Where did you get the inspiration for this? I for one believe it's fantastic! Not from a religious point of view, I see it as Good vs Evil. It's hard ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: It's her.
Pretty cool! I love how it was in short lines. It made it so much easier to read, and it gave it a feeling of urgency. Like he has to ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Eat me.
It left me thinking. It can actually be interpreted in different ways. To me, it corresponds with someone who is being bullied, and is tired of it. It's just saying ...
Aug 15, 2013
