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Re: Another life
Hello Cyr! Anna here to review. This is a really great poem you have here. Let me just say it was a enjoyable read. The flow and emotions in the ...
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Re: A cosmic irony (edited)
Hello Kostia! Another great chapter from one of your works. The first thing I noticed when I was reading was that its very touchy. You explained it in a lot ...
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Re: Chapter 2: Heist
Hello Miraculor This is really great! I love how you explained more about the place they lived in more. I mean the first chapter was good but I feel you ...
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Re: Marked Chapter II- Ember
Hello Star! This is a really touching story, It really did a impact on me. This is a great way to start a book. Even if its not the very ...
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Re: Don McCullin
Hello Terian! Anna here for a review! This is a pretty nice poem I have to say. The emotions are pretty strong and I love the theme of it. The ...
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Re: This is my design
Hello 4evergreen Before I start I just want to say I can't listen to the song right now but I totally will the first chance I get and I'll get ...
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Re: The Monkey And The Bear
Hello Butterfly This is a really good short story. The begging was a little fast but it was okay. I would suggest trying to make it a little longer, maybe ...
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Re: The simple man
Hello Cyr! Anna here for a review! This is a relay great read, I enjoyed it fairly much. There is a few errors, problems with the work. In the first ...
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Re: Prisoner of Crime
Hello Star! This is a very nice short story you have here! I hope to review it! The way you started it was very lovely. It expressed a lot of ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: Last Autumn (part)
Hello Jade Wow, that's what I am going to say. Wow, this is fairly spooky. Wow, great imagery. And wow, Its really great, I can't say I love it because ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: She belongs to the moon (second part of chapter 1)
Hello Kostia! This is so good! its a very interesting piece. So I'm just going to do a short/long review, hope that's okay! Oh also this is my favorite chapter/ ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: Summoning Persephone - Chapter 30
Hello Dream! I hope its okay for me to call you that. This is great! I really love this chapter! The way you ended the chapter really was lovely. I ...
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Re: Fluff Snippet
Hey Star! This is a great short, short story. I really love how this all played out. Its really romantic which is my favorite. Its really great and i hope ...
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Re: Journey of My Heart
Hello Jade! This is a great poem here. This is such a pretty poem. Its very strong and the theme is very touching. The tittle really goes with the poem ...
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Re: Childhood
Hello Rae! I hope your okay with me calling you that... Anyway... This is a pretty good poem! I can tell there is a story behind this and it has ...
Mar 31, 2019
