AngerManagement

Take my hand And I'll take yours I like the beginning of this. It makes me want to read more of it and it suggest that whoever is asking this ...

I really, really liked this. The imagery was amazing, I could visualize the statue and how it would look. I dont see any problem with your rhythm in fact i ...

“Dorio…” “Don’t ‘Dorio…’ me! I’m a big boy, I an handle myself.” Dorio snapped, Full stop instead of comma. turning his back on the young man, ignoring the hurt clearly ...

It is the reason for wars. It gives reasons to kill, to steal, to destroy. We betray to conquer, we hurt to achieve, we undergo to overcome. Some lose themselves ...

I walked down the church aisle with a single white rose in my hands. My father was at my side, guiding me towards the front of the sanctuary. In the ...

"Broken Arrow" was the name outsides gave this place. To the dozen weasels sprawled on rock ledges, it was home. Nice introduction to the scene. If hunger doesn't kill me, ...

My life's a hidden secret, My thoughts throughly protected, My personality a puzzle, My worries intertwined and connected. No one knows or cares, No one knows what I can be, ...

Hi Adeera, I went to the dance not knowing what to expect when you asked if I'd swing i couldn't reject you swirl, turned, and dipped my me all over ...

Hi Imagine, I promised her that I’d meet her here, her favorite park down the street from the public library. But it’s been four years. I had moved away because ...

Hi Sierra, I picked this story because of the name. I love The Killers! :D .....Alright sooo unto more important things. It was really hard to know who's thoughts were ...

I'm not trying to be harsh or anything but for the love of all that is righteous space your story into paragraphs. Its incredibly hard to read it and its ...

Hey Jane, “Mommy, can we go now?” I whined as the four year old me tugged on my mom’s oversized, blue t-shirt. I feel like this line was a little ...

Hey Shadow, Anger here. Firstly I'd like to say that I'm not used to the Zombie genre so it may sound like I'm being harsh. Now that we get each ...

Hai Razster :P, Anger here As Ducky said there really isn't anything to correct so I will just pick key points that i found really hard to understand. But I'd ...

I really liked this prologue unlike many other prologue's I have read. It's short- maybe a bit too short, it goes immediately to the point. The main character had a ...