Published July 18, 2010
Hey Dawn Report fans (all three of you) this is going to be 1 of 3 reports regarding 'power' as a stand-alone side project. However this is will still be in my 'Dawn Reports Style' of writing, yet this will not be considered the 11th report.
It is the reason for wars. It gives reasons to kill, to steal, to destroy. We betray to conquer, we hurt to achieve, we undergo to overcome. Some lose themselves in it, and invite greed in at the cost of everything else if only to have a little bit more. The goal is always in sight and never changing. Always consuming and never forgiving. Power. Always more power!
It is the thirst that is never quenched. It is the harlot who cannot find love as it corrupts and kills. It is the beast that cannot be slain. It is the 'end' the justifies the 'means'. It begins conspiracies and destroys dynasties. It is where the best intentions meet the worst falls. Without it there is nothing. With it there is nothing.
However, this lust cannot be helped for it is only human nature to always crave more. The irony in this funny quite actually; the more power one takes the less humanity one has left to show.
Once it is in the hands of men all hell can break loose, or it can bring about a golden age of peace.
I will continue this matter in my next report.
If you agree or disagree I would love to know.
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i really like this sentence it really gives you a feel of where your going with this!
Again this paragraph is really good, I am finding it difficult to pull anything apart!
I am not sureI get this, because it doesn't make sense.
This sentence needs to be rephrased!
Overall I think this is really good and the use of vocabulary and sentence structure is excetional.
I am looking forward to your next report.
I find this such an intruiging idea, and I totally see what you are hinting at!
Hello there
Wow, I loved this. I felt the pouncing of "power" in every sentence. I have nothing to correct so I'll just comment.
I agree, some people if not everyone ( becuase there may be truth in that every single one of us has that desire to posess power) turn into a different kind of species when thinking of the great outcomes when in power. I don't think anyone or anything is going to be able to control this in the future of mankind.
Good job
I agree completely with what you have written. Especially this line, The only line I kind of disagree with is, How and whereabouts is it meant to bring this Golden age of peace? It seems a little bit far fetched but thats just my opinion.
I really like this report. And i enjoyed reading it.
Keep Writing, Anger.