AngerManagement

Hey Scar *waves* Moonlight flittered down through the leaves and onto the forest floor ligthing Lighting up the trees with its soft and silver glow I don't know but I ...

These days, the world lacks color. Originality is what we crave. Dont be like every other. Dont be the world's bland slave. I liked this, the first line really does ...

Hey Kayla, lead weights falling from the sky scream to just release my burden The first thing I thought when I read this bit was 'Lead weights don't scream.' Maybe ...

Hey Jesse, Why do i I cry, After you cross my mind? This seems awkward, perhaps you could say 'Soon after you cross my mind' Why do I wallow in ...

Hey Retro, This was really great to read. It was sweet and emotional but not sickenly so. It was well written and I could only find two spelling mistakes but ...

My name is Carmine. I awaken on a filthy bed only to be yelled at by my abnoctious obnoxious master, Walt Worth who abuses me and doesn't give me the ...

Hey Fell *waves* Everytime I see your face Lightning flashes and lights up your eyes revealing all that you wanted to keep secret Telling me all that you wanted me ...

Rain begins to fall from a dark, overcast sky, onto a crowd of funeral-goers, standing in front of a closed casket. The people open up black umbrellas and cover themselves ...

I Spy. A juvinile Juvenile game of seek and find. Juvinile, Juvenile yes, but then... let's play a round. Just a test of joy. I spy with my little eye... ...

Hey Spyoh, Four years ago they disappeared Good strong beginning. Filled with questions. Why did they dissapear? This makes the reader want to keep on reading. Like they never existed ...

Hey Megg, This was a good story to read. The first chapter was very basic yet you pulled me in. There was a great description of your MC's life and ...

Red stains on the carpet, contrasting brilliant white, the hands that left them, soaked with red, are begging to be cleaned. This was a good beginning. Very shocking, good imagery. ...

Hey Alwaysbeinspired95 I can't find words To describe who I am, If theres a comma before it, it should be a capital letter. Who I'm becoming. I thought it would ...

I can taste the color purple trickling down the back of my throat And feel the unraveling scent of a used bar of soap I like this. Great imagery and ...

Hey Babs, I opened my eyes, and immediately it felt as though they melted right out of my head, a brown-white-grey slime slopping into the vomit and saliva that my ...