Angels-Symphony

Hey Aushy ^^ Since I'm avoiding writing the rest of my epilogue due to my back of inspiration, and I'm avoiding watching TV with my little sister because she's watching ...

Welcome to YWS, Jay! Like Heart said, remember the 2:1 ratio! Post in the Welcome forum to get yourself started. I'll look aside from the punctuation and other tech errors ...

Hey Great Escape! I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer today ;P Welcome to YWS! I think saw you as "novice" but I may be seeing things wrong *_* Please ...

Demi!! Like Blink, I haven't read anything of yours in a long while, either. I'm excited ^^ I'm not sure what you mean by "grey". Are you referring to the ...

Hi Fringe ^^ I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer this evening. Welcome to YWS, by the way! *slams stereo* For some reason, phantom of the opera exploded *_* For ...

Ahh, a timeless poem xD *hits gold star* Though there is absolutely nothing going on in this poem in particular, it has described "writer's block" and mocks the way some ...

Hi Benny ^^ Shina here ;P And I'll be your reviewer this evening. I'm not going to get into all the technical stuff because I think Fand covered it, so ...

Hi Dr. Pepper! As you've requested, I will review. So... I read the first 2 paragraphs and stopped because I've already found a problem. I can't get over the fact ...

I love your stubby fingers and your crooked little toes(.) I love your chubby cheeks and your little button nose(.) I love your big blue eyes and your auburn hair(.) ...

[quote=]What I left behind Pictures that say more than words taped onto her wall, everyone of them were loved but she left them all(.) Make this a period. Paints in ...

Hey Iain ^^ I came to review another one of your poems. I like this one and I don't like animal killing either. It's a really stupid sport. Though I ...

Hi Loredaen ^^ Welcome to YWS ;P I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer today. If you need any help learning the ropes of this place, feel free to PM/aim/msn ...

[quote=]Death follows you like the wind(.) ()you never here* it(,)< Since it seems you're into darker poems, why don't you check this one out Click Here It took a lot ...

Hi Youreit ^^ Nice to meet another 13-year old on YWS. If you have the time, you should look up Evi. Another one of the young writers around here xD ...

Hey Evi ^^ xD It's been 5 months since you've posted this, and 3 since it's last been edited. I can't do anything more than comment ^^ I realized that ...