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Re: Sunshine
Hi Morrigan! This is Angel here to attempt a review- I'm not entirely sure how helpful I'll be in face of this beautiful work but I shall try. I've read ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: February 17, 1874
Hi there! I'm not really familiar with American history but I went through the link at top so I did have a general idea before I read the story. The ...
Feb 4, 2016 -
Re: super heroes save themselves, too
Hi there! The title for this poem really drew me in- saving myself is a sentiment I've always loved. Maybe it's because I don't like relying on other people as ...
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: The Nightlight
Hi there! I've never really used a nightlight but your story did resonate with me- it reminded me of my teddy bear, Bananas who has similar monster-vanquishing abilities. The only ...
Jan 13, 2016 -
Re: voicemail [please hang up and try again]
Hi Pompadour! I really don't have much to say about the parts of this poem that I loved: the only thing that come to my head is that it's so ...
Dec 1, 2015 -
Re: The Extraordinaires
Hi there, spinelli! Honestly, this was great. Your descriptions, imagery and metaphors were fantastic and there was perfect balance to it- not too much, not too little. I was entranced ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Mike's adventure begins
Hi, Reader! A late welcome to YWS! :3 I hope you like it so far. When I first read the story, I was rather confused. I re-read it and it ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Sparks of Fire
Hey there, Sage! Alright, first impressions first. There's a lot happening in this story and it's over a longer than usual time frame as well which lead to me thinking, ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Girl with Coldwater Eyes
Hi there! I'm gonna start by saying I really, really liked this. I don't know why, but I guess the originality of the piece called to me. You have a ...
Feb 11, 2013 -
Re: Happiness is a choice
Hi, Manish! I'm here to review story. I don't think your story has a plot as such, it's more of a person reminiscing a moment. I like your idea and ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Dannitus and the Dragon's Treasure
Hey Caylleen! I'm here to review your piece. I quite like the tone of the narration; it was fairytale-ish with classics' English touch to it. The tone wasn't exactly casual- ...
Dec 19, 2012 -
Re: Confused and Knocking
Hey there! I love the narration in the story. You can't stop reading and you actually care about the character, in a sense. You want to know what happens next ...
Dec 10, 2012 -
Re: Its All In the Meeting.
Hey blake! I'm here to review your piece- maybe less review and more fangirl over how awesome it is. I loved it. Honestly, I don't believe in the 'love at ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: The Labrynth: The Untold story.
Hi sourdude! First of all, you have a good idea over here. It's rare for the Minotaur to be portrayed as anything but a monster and you've done a good ...
Dec 8, 2012 -
Re: The Angel of Death
Hi there~ I loved this. It was just amazing. There's nice mixture of emotions, a sort of flow as the story turns from happy to sad but remains descriptive at ...
Jul 25, 2012
