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Re: I Wish This Was A Goodbye
This was simply amazing. Reading through it I didn't see any mistakes that jumped out at me. The flow of it was beautiful and feeling.. struck my heart. I think ...
Apr 13, 2013 -
Re: Light in the Darkness
Thank you so much for your review. I think I fixed everything that you commented on. It was great to hear your feedback and I appreciate it immensely. This poem ...
Dec 22, 2012 -
Re: I knew it would be raining
The imagery in this poem is wonderful. I love your word choice, it's genius. I found it way too short though. I wanted to read more. The only thing I ...
Dec 21, 2012 -
Re: Tainted Soul- Prologue
I want to thank you all for your comments. I will definitely edit it more. A lot of the questions you have are actually what I was aiming for. It ...
Dec 20, 2012 -
Re: What you taught me <3
Thanks for the reviews you guys. I really appreciate it. I fixed the spacing, sorry about that. I copied it from a word document and that's how it turned out. ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Bloodshed Kindness
Wow this was amazing!! I'm not the best poet, but even I know that this is great stuff! I can't wait to read more from you, keep writing :)
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Forever 18
Well it's not a Vampire book. It's actually going to be a very small part in a book I'm writing with my friend. It will not end up being cliche ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: True Love
Thank you guys! I just got bored and started typing, and bam! Poem lol. But yeah i wasn't really trying to rhyme, but in some parts it turned out like ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Small Town Love (Chapter 2)
Thank you so much!! I'll have chapter 3 up soon :)
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Small Town Love (Prolouge)
haha thanks :) i fixed my mistake :) I'm still working on the title, but i guess i need to write more to find the perfect one :) thanks for ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Unexpected! Chapter 3
Thanks for the review Taylor!! I would love to PM you whenever i post more! :) Your review wasn't too rough just honest. which i needed so thank you! I ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Unexpected!: Chapter 2
You didn't take long at all! At least your review was more of a review than mine! Anyway your making perfect sense here! I was thinking of that when i ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: Unexpected: Prolouge
Thank you!!! :D i will have the first chapter up as soon as i get enough points lol :D :D
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Be careful what you wish for
Thanks guys! This really helps a lot! :D
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Definitely maybe
haha I will definitely pass that along to Allyson! :D I am trying to get her to join, but she's not a serious writer, she just writes from time to ...
Nov 19, 2010