AngelMarie

I Like this. The title is cool. I agree with justtrying about the length, extend it. And i like the line "quiet, quiet, patience" but again i agree with Justtrying, ...

I really like this! My parents were divorced when i was to young to really feel anything. But they got Remarried and My dad and step mom almost got a ...

This was absolutely amazing!!!!!!! I have nothing else to say :) :D

I love this Skins! As always your writing drags me in from beginning to end! I don't really have anything to say because everyone pretty much said it all!:D Great ...

I agree completely!!!! :D Good examples too! I especially like the gun one heehee :D

This isn't the best work I've done, it's kind of sloppy to be honest, but I'd like feedback on it anyway :)

His hand brushed against mine. Electrifying. A bolt of lust rushed through my viens, and I found myself staring into his deep brown eyes. This was pathetic. Me. Him. It ...

Alright I love that this poem makes no sense!! :D haha Ok, so people gave me words and I made a poem out of it. So it doesn't make very ...

I really love this poem!!!!! :D It's kind of sad, but really good. I love the emotion in it, it's really good. And you have really vivid descriptions :D keep ...

Red is corrections, and blue is comments :D Your heart is beating fast. Great opening line, it really drug me in Goosebumps start to send chills all over your body ...

I really like this a lot. It's a good preface, because it leaves the reader wondering which in turn make them want to read more :D so good job on ...

well hey there meep! love the name by the way (: well i absolutely love this! your writing is so good, and the emotion you put into it is perfect. ...

Well other than the fact that you kept switching Aeron to Eirin through out the story it was fantastic! :D Can't wait to read more! and yes i think this ...

This is amazing. So much emotion, it's breathtaking. I found myself trying not to cry while reading it. You are a really talented writer! Keep up the great work. Really ...

you should absolutely keep going! this is a wonderful story and i must read more! I canot handle that ending! It's just too sad. you're a great writer keep it ...