Angel17

the emotions coveyed was wonderful and deep. i loved the imagery. Wonderful poem!

I loved the contrasts made between darkness and light, i loved the imagery used. This poem was very deep, but i also agree with xanthan gum that the ending was ...

I really liked the colourful imagery, but i do think it would be better if you also included other images. Good poem though, Lovely ending! :D

This had very strong imagery and gave a clear insight into the meaning. Very well written

I think this was a great poem. You have a wonderful knowledge of what vocabulary to use. I think you should use necessary instead of requisite however. Great poem!

I loved the rhyme/rhythm in this poem, it flowed really well, and this had emotions running throughout. Good job!

I liked the last line but not the second line. I understand the second line but think it should be re- phrased.

At first i enjoyed the repetition but then it seemed to much. I suggest you lose some of the repition. I liked the imagery however, and i thourougly enjoyed the ...

This had really deep emotions running throughout the poem. I loved the way the atmosphere of the setting reflected on your inner emotion.

The poem was creative, imaginative with lovely imagery, but then the last line was weak. It was too cliche and the rest of the poem was beautifully done.

though Should this not be through? A beautiful and imaginative piece of writing. It hadd a day dream feel to it. Very good poem!

coupe Should be cope? A Nice short poem, with a nice rhyme scheme.

I agree with Misty Lynn, the rhyming was forced and affected the rhythm, but the content was good :)

I agree, there was some really strong imagery in this, which helped create a mood/tone for the poem

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