I absolutely loved this. It has such power and meaning for it to be just a haiku! Punctuation would help for those who don't analyze like I do, but overall, it is simply wonderful. If I am certain, but I believe you are speaking to a girl about the relationship you two share, you thought it was something more than it was and in the end you feel like a fool. Like I said before though, I absolutely loved this. I hope to see more haiku's from you, this on was too amazing and I wonder what else is in that mind of your's that can write such amazing pieces.
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