Published March 31, 2006
the worlds a pool of wonder,
as you look fourth and yonder
you see a star of hope,
and that is how we cope.
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yeah i didn't notice i wrote coupe which is also a word ha ha an yeah i could probably expand it i put in punctuation
Expand on this. It's too short to provide a proper critique to this - each line is also sort of disjointed from the next.
cope
start using punctuation. please =/
A Nice short poem, with a nice rhyme scheme.
LoL u've got Nate's avatar.
the poem is short and sweet.(infact very short)
The rhyming is good.