Anabelle

Hey there! First off, what an interesting topic to write about! Most love stories between a mortal and immortal explore the idea of what would happen as one grew older ...

Hey there! I really liked this because of the Greek mythology; I liked how you threw in little things that hinted on what each Greek god/goddess' specialty was. I love ...

Hey there! So, first of all, I love the premise of this short story. While everyone is writing happy, cliché stories about the fourth of July you went a totally ...

Hello, MasterGrieves! For such a short poem, there isn't much to critique so well done on that. :) Although short, this poem is very powerful. It can be looked at ...

Hi, Renard! Maybe, I'm just stupid but this was a little confusing at times. I do like that it has a dark aspect to it and it has great emotion. ...

Oh my... so brilliant! Even some of the writings you discarded were good. This was very original and a great way to get out writer's block. Writing about writer's block ...

Hello, Renard! For such a short poem, there isn't much to critique so well done on that. :) Although short, this poem is very powerful. It can be looked at ...

Hello, anshira! I really enjoyed reading your poem and how it explored the feelings of love. I think about love quite often and the many emotions that are tacked onto ...

Hello, ScarletDreams14! It was such a pleasure reading this poem! I noticed that you said it was old and needed to be updated, but for something that seems so raw, ...

Hello, Annaclare! This is such a beautiful poem! I absolutely love the comparison between love and the moon. I have always thought a lot about love and think it's amazing ...

Wow. While short, this was very deep and emotional. I absolutely loved how you ended the story with one word; it has great impact and left me frozen for a ...

Hello, here for a review! I loved the description in this piece and it is clear that you have a gift for writing. I love nature, so it was wonderful ...