Ambrose1234

hi Chem I don't even know where to start. This is very good. I find myself feeling as if I was there. The regret, the pain, the love. It fells ...

Honestly, I don't know where to start the review. This poem hits me. And confuses me. I find that the poem is talking about memories, and how burying the dead ...

Hello. I'm doing a review now. Likes: I like the overall story and the themes. The final line, that they would never truly leave, is one that I feel captures ...

Hello! how are you doing today? Well, I found this poem very interesting. Don't get me wrong, I did like the poem, but the setting I find interesting. you speak ...

I'm not the type to be interested in fantasy stories, but I found this one quite interesting. The overall atmosphere is gloomy, and the thought that the prince's parents may ...

Overall, this is an interesting story. I like how the story doesn't exactly have a good guy. One of the interesting things I think of is the name of the ...

Overall, the story is kinda cheesy. I'm not saying anything against it, but the best way I could say to improve it would be to focus more on the moments. ...

Howdy! I'm gonna be doing a review: My my, so much to go over... Where to start? The pacing. The pacing is absolutely perfect. having separate paragraphs is really important, ...

This is a very interesting narrative. I honestly find nothing I can critique. Though I am confused by the "warmth between her legs" part (idk what this is supposed to ...

Hello Chem, I'm doing a review now. Overall, good poem. It's an emotional roller coaster. I can feel every word. Did you mean for there to be two characters talking ...

Hello, I'm doing a review now. Overall, it is a good poem. I can feel the emotion you put into it. I don't think anything needs to be corrected. I ...

Alright review time! I see this as a pretty interesting poem, and I've seen your other poem where you specifically said you are afraid of drowning. I don't have any ...

Hello, I'm going to do a review now. Overall, I see this poem as good. The space between the last 3 lines makes each one hit me harder. The poem, ...

Overall it is a good story. I feel like this is more of a rant than a story, however I do find it interesting. I don't believe anything needs to ...

Alright, so, correct me if I'm wrong, but you lost someone to suicide, and blamed yourself for it. That's the main theme I got from this. But this story/poem is ...