Amberla93

Hi, I enjoed this very much. The only change I would consider making has already been noted. I just wanted to say, if this is the first poem you ever ...

Ello, Like others when I read this I was a bit confused, but as I read the comments it makes more sense. I'm very glad he proved you wrong, and ...

Oh my goodness, this is very captivating. Very emotional, and sad... yet it leaves a couple questions. Like, where were they going? Is the child a little boy, or a ...

Ello, This was very sweet, I even laughed at the cuteness of it. I loved the third verse, "Mom says, "NO GIRLS!" Haha that was just grand. I liked how ...

Hi there, First let me say, you have NO idea how much I can relate to this. It may not make sense to some people, but it makes perfect sense ...

Hi, I very much think you should continue writing this. I've only read a couple of your pieces but you seem very talented. Personaly you captured my intrest quickly. I ...

Ello :) I rather enjoyed this. It made me think. I agree with IcyFlame, I would replace the numbers with words. It would flow better with the style of the ...

First off, let me say I loved the message in this, but I do have a few nitpicks for you. I am lonely , dont feel loved . There ' ...

You can really feel the emotion in this poem. I love poems like that, and this one is just great! I'm sure there are plently pf people who caan relate ...

I loved this, I really did. So many people have been hurt like this.. most readers will be able to relate. One thing I suggest though is making sure all ...

I really don't see any thing wrong with this. Aside from missing punctuation in some places... It has a nice rhythm and flow to it, and it was easy to ...

I'd love to know exactly what happened.. what do they hate her for? What made everything change? This was very interesting.. but still, I'd love to know exactly what happened. ...

I like this, though I do have a suggestion. Even today when I listen to those songsit brings in old memories along. I think it would flow a bit better ...

Ello, I liked this... It can be related to many people's relationships. Not just the classic tale of Romeo and Juliet. :) Good job, keep writing :)

Ok first, let me say that as a girl, I would LOVE for someone to write me a poem, so thumbs up there! :) And this is very sweet. I ...