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Hi Snikkia! I really enjoyed this piece. The idea of a girl hearing music for the first time is neat, and this has a lot of potential. A couple of ...

Hey there IcyFlame! You've created a very interesting scenario here, and there are several ways this could go. So much happens in this piece that it was quite confusing the ...

Hey there! I will start by saying that I really like the messages of both poems. Both topics are close to my own heart, and I understand where you're coming ...

Hey ktajlili! I feel terrible that it's taken me so long to get to this... I'm so sorry! Anyway, I will write my comments in here as I read through ...

Hi Boo! Here is the review, as requested. This poem is interesting, and I'm not entirely sure how to approach this. This poem wasn't what I expected it to be ...

Hey Jasmine! Here is the review that you requested. This was as beautiful as it was heartbreaking. Abuse, no matter what form it takes, is hard to read about, but ...

Love. Love. Love. That is all... well, not quite. I love the fact that it isn't completely polished. It makes this feel so much more real. While having a poem ...

Hey Flower - This is the review that you requested in my WRFF thread. I'm sorry it took so long for me to get this done... Anyway, this is about ...

Hi! Here is the review that you requested! There is a lot of emotion in this poem. You clearly conveyed the image of a relationship that spirals out of control. ...

Hi there! I'll start by saying that this has a lot of potential, and I am curious as to what comes next. I don't think it is rubbish by any ...

Hey idraax! This poem reminds me a lot of how I write a lot of the time. I find that my inspiration changes drastically when I write outside from when ...

Let me start off by saying that there was something about this that I just couldn't help liking. It had an unusual flow, but it worked pretty well. I don't ...

I liked this, because it feels quite relatable, but I have to agree that this needs to be developed more. The poem is very bare-bones, which can be alright in ...

First of all, I want to start by saying that this poem made me smile. And not just little, barely there smile, but a full out, teeth-showing smile. I really ...

I really liked this poem, because it is a story told simply, and without flowery wording. I find that a lot of people crowd out the potential power of their ...