AlyssaKyle

I was slightly thrown off and confused at the beginning of the poem, but then things started to clear up the further in I went. I love how you make ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. I loved how it started off in the opposite way of what we have gotten used to. I would have liked the poem if ...

The rhyming is sporadic and it through me off when reading the poem. I'm not sure if you meant to rhyme or if it just happened, but if you did ...

Normally I don't comment on the lenght of a poem as long as the entire story is told. However, in this case I feel that it is too short. We ...

Hello! As a general rule of thumb, try to keep your stanzas the same length unless they come at the very end of he poem. The one with three lines ...

I liked how your line breaks were slightly off. However, it would have improved the flow of your poem if there were a few more commas in certain places. I'd ...

Hey there! I truly enjoyed reading this story. I understand what you were trying to accomplish with the second paragraph, but I would have prefered it if you saved some ...

Okay, first I shall throw my nitpicks at you! (I apoologize but I do not know how to quote things) On the fifth lin "Until I reach the very top ...

I agree that some punctuation would be helpful to teh flow of the poem. Aslo, try to keep your stanzas the same length or realtively the same if at all ...

I don't think there is a length limit on how long a poem can be. But I would suggest that you make your stanzas the same length-it is easiers for ...

I have to say, I really enjoyed reading this. I am typically not a fan of either reetition or rhyming, but you did both very well here. The rhyming did ...

I felt that the lack of punctuation interruptd the flow of the poem. When I realized that I had hit the end of a sentence I had to go back ...

I liked the flow of this. I'm glad you kept your rhyme scheme consistent throughout the poem, and the words you used to rhyme didn't feel overly forced like it ...

Now that I know this was menat to be a song, it works a lot better. It has good structure to it. Don't be afraid to deviate from your pattern ...

Despite what some people think, though the sentiments were a bit cliche, they really worked in this. They expressed the emotions in a way that the reader could comprehend quickly, ...