Aliceinhorrorland

Hey! Ima review this poem, so lets get started! I want to start off by saying that this is not, by any means, a bad poem. I just, personally, think ...

Heyyyy, i'm here to review! I'm going to start off by saying that this poem must have taken forever to write. It's super detailed and in a way leaves it ...

Heyo! I’m here to say that this short story is really good! I mean why write notes when you can write This??? Ahahaha! Anyways I really like the words you ...

Hiya, I’m here to review your spectacular poem! Honestly, your word choices were really great, with how they fit into the poem, it didn’t feel unbalanced like some poems. Your ...

Heyo! I'm here to review!! I really felt the passion and feelings you put into this poem, and I really like the moral of it. It's a bit of a ...

Helloooooo, im here to reviewwww! Okay so I think your poem is both heartbreaking and amazing at the same time. (Never thought i'd put those words in the same sentence!) ...

Hiyaaaaaa, i'm here to review!! So I really liked the rhymes and how it flowed really naturally, cause you're honestly a really great writer. (Wow, I say really a lot.) ...

Helloooo! I'm here to review your poem. Honestly, I think your poem really shows the reality of life, it's not all fun and games, your actions have consequences. This is ...

Hiya! I'm here to review your amazing poem! Okay so first things first, I personally think your poem started out a little shaky, but the last 3 stanzas were absolutely ...

Hiya! I think, for the most part, you did a really good job with this poem. The only critique I have is I think the spacing was a little weird. ...

Helloooooo!! I think your poem was really good, I think you made a few grammar mistakes, but nothing that took away from the meaning. I really like your words choices ...

I really like the way this was written! And I like the words that kept being repeated, because it makes the message even stronger! I do think that there can ...

Hello! Firstly, I want to say, I think this is a brilliant poem! The wording you chose kept me hooked until the very end, and left me wanting more. So ...

Heyyyy! I think your poem was really good and had a lot of strong moments within it. I think the "spacing" you did with the lines really brought this poem ...

Woah. I really like this poem, its short and simple, but the meaning just hits you like a hurricane. I can relate to this poem in a way, but I ...