Hiyaaaaaa, i'm here to review!! So I really liked the rhymes and how it flowed really naturally, cause you're honestly a really great writer. (Wow, I say really a lot.) So anyways, I can't even think of any critiques EXCEPT I think the ending was a little sudden, but endings are difficult to do. I think everything else about your poem was flawless and was definitely in the spirit of Halloween! So, like I stated, your poem is AWESOME, and you should be extremely proud! Hope you had a happy Halloween! Ima go now... (Also, thanks for reviewing my works, I appreciate it!)
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