AliceFairfield

Just how hard was that test...? Anyway, your writing style's great. It's simple, easy to follow, yet descriptive enough to formulate a good story. I find it interesting how the ...

I feel you (nods). Writing poetry is easy? I'd love to fling water on the idiot who said that to me a while ago. Composing prose is hard enough, but ...

This was a very somber poem (in a good way). Indeed, it's dangerous and unhealthy to be left alone with your own thoughts if you're feeling depressed. I noticed a ...

This is one of the scariest short stories I've ever read in my whole life. And it's written originally in Tamil? Amazing, you've managed to translate it so well. I ...

This was terrifying. In a good way. Religious fanaticism and blood sacrifices are most certainly under the "horror" category. I especially liked how you described Mary's death as her being ...

Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I feel that this poem is about a love that has ended. And in a painful ending at that. The speaks seems to ...

This poem is beautiful.^^ I live in an area with a lot of forests, so I can relate to this work very much. There's something, as you put it, otherworldly ...

This is amazing! I could practically see the characters and the "mademoiselle" going about their daily lives right in front of me. The imagery and descriptive vocabulary used in this ...

Please correct me if I'm wrong...But this poem sounds like a description of suicidal tendencies. Either that, or the speaker is planning to murder someone else. Indeed, having to choice ...

Indeed, anyone would be furious in this situation. This poem is concise enough to convey the speaker's anger perfectly. Long, artsy phrases aren't necessary to express feelings. Of course, the ...

This is wonderful! Your descriptions of the setting and characters are very realistic (I understand this is fantasy story however). I'm fond of Steni already. She's so tough and impressive, ...

Ouch. This poem hits home so hard it hurts...Good criticism is absolutely necessary for every work, script or not. But it sucks when people keep pointing out the flaws and ...

This is deep (please forgive my choice of words). "I'll always be your father, and no matter what you've done you'll always be my son" really struck. I can't imagine ...

I loved the stong imagery used in this poem. I can practically see the waking-up-in-the-morning scene unfold in front of me. My favorite part is the "muscles tense and release" ...

This is an incredibly touching poem. Indeed, love is a sweet sorrow that most humans can't fully live or grow without. Personally, I do believe there are exceptions to this ...