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Okay so I'm just going to do this real quick on the first few lines. So where do I begin? Today, had a great time With a friend ... A ...

Hi, so I'm going up against you in the poetry competition, which means I'm scoping you out and I ran across this and Dust to Dust, which I read beforehand. ...

It's pretty, but I don't exactly see the satire in it. It is a similar take on mirrors that Silvia Plath brought to her own mirror poem. The main difference ...

The opening line needs a little bit of work in my opinion. I don't quite understand how that is supposed to make sense. Hearts could be rented from chests, or ...

The first part of this seems somewhat disconnected from the second part of it. I don't really see how this section about the women being told to go home and ...

Alright, so for my initial reading, I jotted down some notes I'd like you to have on the poem. Commas and other punctuation should be against text, not with a ...

Awww, you wrote this for me

First off, I think this poem really brings up a good question. Now onto the review. Some of your rhymes in this are stiff, meaning the word doesn't quite fit ...

First thing first, I'm going to get rid of my nit-picking before I get into a non-personal biased review. This is your warning

Hi Sparkles I think this poem does something interesting with it's structure, but I think you can push it further if you let yourself go a bit. Using the structure ...

Hi there. Reading Notes: With the sandstorm hindering my vision, I was skeptic that I was looking at the tail of the horse I was apparently riding on. I was ...

Hi Ethwe. I understand that you have formatting issues with this. I hope your future works are not also messed up. If you want to fix it, I would suggest ...

I felt like this story was very hard to connect to. The opening lines are a perfect example of something foreign to my understanding rather than something I can grasp. ...

Hey Areeba, I felt like this poem needed some work with creating things that were specific. Having a poem that is too broad is dangerous because people want to read ...

When I red the subgenre, I read humor, just to show you where my mind was at when I read this. That being said, I think you did a wonderful ...